Eyes Like A Maze Poem by Fox Fang

Eyes Like A Maze

Rating: 4.0


I swear I got lost, while stareing into your beautiful eyes
do you know you can hypnotize every guy?
I don't ever want to say good-bye

But good-bye is just a way,
to start another page,
51508910 pages as we age,
our love is blazing wildly in a rage,

Sooner or later we'll burn down the world
but you will always be with me, girl
Stranded in a never ending sea, (world has ended; nothing but water)
but the ocean waves guides our sail,
the future we couldn't see,
and the ocean is like a jail,
keeping us captive in its' calm waves,
but that doesn't matter because we're with each other.

I was stareing into your eyes, and it brought me to the time where the world ended, I wonder if everything will come true, then you lean on my shoulders, I put my arms around you, and noticed... How could the world end...when the world is in my arms..? I'll protect you, Forever, My World.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 28 November 2009

Whoever gave you that 6, is obviously jealous of your 'most romantic muse' FF! I think this was beautifully ethereal and most comforting. The forth stanza is in a world of it's own. Smiling at you Tai

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