Eyes That Care Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Eyes That Care

Rating: 5.0


Looking down one's nose
Attracts anger and quarrel;
Good view without disdain
leads one to live so well.

Unpleasant and insulting eyes
Never see their own spot;
Arrogance toward something
Makes one lose a lot.

Seeing something in a nice way
Opens the door for harmony;
Using sight in better perspective
Oftentimes brings beauty.

To gaze into an appearance
One needs not a blank stare;
He may even take a glance
And his eyes will still care.

Monday, December 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Avid Fan 05 May 2019

A masterfully crafted poem, sir Bernard.

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Cheryl Tutaan 02 May 2017

Strongly agree with you. :) A clever write, quiet deep yet absolutely true. Thanks, Bernard... A 10 for you.

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Thanks, CHE... This poem is actually an acrostic one, LAGUNA SOUTH.... By the way, your important vote was not submitted due to weak internet connection..... haaaaaistttt.... hahaha

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Manonton Dalan 15 January 2016

you can't take down a good man by just stare hehehhehehehe

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Thanks, Manonton.... Your visit means so much to me.... I've treasured your comment for more than a year now.....

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Bernard F. Asuncion

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