Face Down In The Sand Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

Face Down In The Sand

Rating: 5.0


Immigrant father from the land of terror
What have you learnt now that your son is dead
Conscripted youth fleeing back to the land of terror
What awaits you my child, my boy, my dead young man?
The desert sand and a bomb in your arms

Pray brother before your bullets of death
Thud into their target of random life
Seconds before your own time to go
Do you consider that perhaps there is no martyrdom
Just a place in the sand for your face to fall?

At least your startled target fell without the worry of
A life of torment and self torture

It is a fine line that separates you both
Lying side by side face down in the sand
I will ask the innocent I will ask the brave
I will ask the beautiful what side of that
Fine line will they choose to lie down on

Along with me I think they will sleep face down in the sand
Forever smiling of their choice

Geoffrey F.

Tuesday, December 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering,world conflicts,world peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My small contribution to the Anthology- Poetry against Terror- amazingly put together by Dr Fabrizio Frosini and his team of dedicated assistants. My thanks to Daniel Brick for his understanding of my poem and words on the same.My thanks also for allowing me the honour to be a part of the project. Geoffrey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Ahern 16 July 2018

Hi Geoffrey, as you can tell by my lateness of commenting on your poem written in 2015, I am slowly, ever so slowly working my way through the site. A wonderful poem about the terrors and their actions that walk this troubled World.

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Geoffrey Fafard 18 July 2018

Thank you indeed John. I am amazed at your on going commitment to all things poetic. Cheers Geoffrey.

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Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

Congratulations on your posting in this category. Great write.++10

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Geoffrey Fafard 16 June 2018

Robert.You do me an honour. Thank you indeed.Geoffrey.

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Rajnish Manga 15 June 2018

The poem works like a mirror to those involved in the mindless acts of terrorism and its futility on the global stage. Following words can jolt their foundations: .......there is no martyrdom Just a place in the sand for your face to fall?

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Geoffrey Fafard 16 June 2018

fantastic comments Rajnish. Thank you so much. Geoffrey.

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Kelly Kurt 15 June 2018

The walk a mile in their shoes thought is a good one. Few can even imagine. Keep advancing peace.

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Geoffrey Fafard 15 June 2018

Thank you Kelly for your comments and thoughts. Cheers Geoffrey.

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 June 2018

A beautiful poem on terrorism and its painful effect on lives. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being chosen.

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Geoffrey Fafard 15 June 2018

Geetha. it is so good that you take the time to comment. This means a great deal to me. Thank you.Geoffrey.

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