Failed Dimensions Poem by Satish Verma

Failed Dimensions

Rating: 5.0


Moon wanted to bathe
your singed feet with moonlight since
you were walking on simmeringcoals.

A honey soaked watershed
divides a holy stream.Thick very thick
tears will roll down on time's cheeks.

You will start make-up
with pink eyes.Time to celebrate the
rising sun to pick handful of stars.

Sunday, September 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 27 September 2020

Fantastic poem. I pick these 3 lines....5 *** A honey soaked watershed divides a holy stream.Thick very thick tears will roll down on time's cheeks.

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