Failure Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Failure

Rating: 4.9


I tried my very best
I have exhausted
All that can be required from my capabilities
Beyond power and strength
But I lost.

Shoulders and tears dropped
Knocked the wind
Gritted my teeth
Felt the world
Has abandoned me.

I licked myself into shape
And have thought carefully
What went wrong
I prayed hard
And called on God.

I brushed myself
Honed my skills
And prepared myself
To get back
In the same arena.

Hell bent to win
I renewed my energy
Increased my pace
Used all legal means to win
But still for the second time
I failed.

I cannot accept defeat
And I told myself
I am not a quitter
I forced my butt
And tried with all my might
And here at the same field
For the third time.

Yet luck
And success
Were so elusive
I was doomed
To be a failure.

But my mind and heart
Cried otherwise
I used my failures
Put them together
To make me stronger.

I changed course
Now I see the light
Stars are shining bright above me
Finally
Fate smiles at me.

Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, January 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: failure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

I used my failures Put them together To make me stronger. I changed course Now I see the light Stars are shining bright above me Finally Fate smiles at me..........beautiful expression with nice theme. Lively poem.

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Thank you, Kumarmani for your wonderful comment. Your visit is much appreciated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

Failure is the pillar of success! ....I cannot accept defeat/And I told myself/I am not a quitter....! Stay optimistic, determined and focused, you will be the winner! An excellent poem Rose.......10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2018

A fantastic comment, Dr. Dillip. I feel humbled and honored.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2018

Beyond power and strength! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 April 2022

You have proved that'failures are the pillars of success'.we should take it as a lesson from this beautifully crafted poem.

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Valsa George 29 September 2020

Falling down is never a failure, but lying down without trying to stand up is indeed a failure. You have been defeated many a time, yet you never gave up. Here I find in you the grit of a real fighter. Finally you turned failures into strengths and now success is yours and fate smiles at you! Wonderful....! Only people with this sort of a mental disposition will be successful in life Quite an inspirational write! Top score.....! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2019

It is said: failure is the pillar of success! A wonderful poem brilliantly penned and amazingly shared...........10

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Bipasha D 08 May 2019

A poem with a great message. To quit is to fail. keep trying and success will eventually come.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2019

I licked myself into shape And have thought carefully What went wrong I prayed hard And called on God... beautiful poem. failures teach us a lot....... from the ashes we emerge like the Phoenix. thanku. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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