Fall You Do Not In Sin Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Fall You Do Not In Sin

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Practicing unrighteous task
You do not fall in ego
Do not you fall dear soul
Keep your right status ahead.

Evil act is sign of a vice
Vices are acquired by senses
Be careful dear soul and keep
Right action is key to joy.

You do not fall in greed again
Do not cause harm to others
Giving pain means to receive this
Be careful dear soul for future.

Time runs in wheel and life too
Once you commit sin you will cry
Try not to do mistake by chance
Fall you do not at all in sin.

Sunday, September 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 18 September 2016

A vice! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Khaki 21 October 2020

Soul should be careful not to fall in sin. This poem is very interestingly written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 July 2019

True, 'Fall you do not at all in sin', Who does not commit a sin? But id you are truly repentant, ... I will come to render you a helping hand, said the Lord th B Geeta. Very well said.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Falling in sin is not good. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Clarence Prince 27 September 2016

A good warning for all the wicked minded people, As wickedness is sinful!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 September 2016

Good advice and warning for those on the spiritual path. (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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