Fallen Angel Poem by Axley Jade Blaze

Fallen Angel

Rating: 4.8


Fallen Angel
Can it be?
Fallen Angel
Cannot see

Blinded, by the evil ways
Misery-filled, endless days
Now her wings, they've turned black
Because she cannot
Find her way back
Her head starts spinning
As the white stuff is winning
Nose, it drips
Throat; she grips
Voice—it cracks
Depth it lacks
On she talks
She falls
She stumbles
She cannot even walk!
Dilated eyes,
This angel in disguise
Friendships, they are fake,
And minds they are raped.
Laughter and love—
She had, up above
Mouth, growing numb
She feels like she's won;
At least for right now,
She is high again somehow
Breaths become deeper
Cravings make her weaker
One more time
—And then everything is fine
Searching for love
To escape up above
Eyes filled with pain;
Life is too plain
Euphoria we crave;
The weak, not the brave
And, again we give in,
Even she—
This Fallen Angel could not win
The room filled with dust
A sickness—a must
We take it all in
As we embrace this sin
Right in the nose
As we strike another pose
You know—the pose of the user
Just another fien'd out loser!
High, and so loud,
The room starts to crowd
Friends, they are not
They sit there, and ROT
As more elevated, they get
She's overwhelmed with regret

So, what is the way?
What is her choice?
Should she start to cry?
Or, should she rejoice?

But, Fallen Angel
What will ultimately become—
Of her life?
Of this fun?

Fallen Angel
Who is she?
Fallen Angel
Can it be?

Fallen Angel—
Yes, she's me.

© copyright 2002-2024 Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel
Friday, May 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,epical,fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 March 2018

She falls She stumbles She cannot even walk..... who is this fallen angel........... you answer it...... but should it be so negative.? ? ? a reader asks himself...........thank you for the descriptive poem of your theme.. tony

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Nicole Settimi 18 February 2019

Thx as always, Dr. Brahim! The negative tone is an implication of the disappointment which the girl faces, when she realizes it's her. Perhaps, only a side of her, but a side she has recognized finally, and like anybody who dislikes looking in the mirror, she is faced with the unfortunate reality of who | what she has become. I appreciate your thoughts! Xx NDS

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