False Love The Pain Of Life Poem by Jorge Arturo Valles Anguiano

False Love The Pain Of Life

Rating: 4.5


While I'm walking on a path,
I found something really shining,
Do you know what it's?
It's you,
Before I found you,
All was dark,
All was boring,
All was pain...,
But you..,
You're my rescuer,
You saved me from all that,
but now,
You'll hurt me more,
when I know you'll not love me.

Friday, October 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about a young man that has suffered all his life, from when he bornt to now, but now, he found someone that he'll eternally love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 November 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. Lovely piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and well penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Jorge. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Jorge Valles 10 November 2015

I read it, and it's a well done poem, nicely done, Chindeu.

0 0
Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

Love is a crazy thing. Thanks, Jorge

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success