Ellia Keil

Rookie (July 5,1995 - / Columbus, Ohio)

False promises Poem by Ellia Keil


Love that would never end
Love that was loyal
Love that was kind
Love that was truthful
Love that never hurt
Those were your promises to me

Love that killed me
Love that lied
Love that was hateful
Love that cheated
Love that ended
Lies do not become us
So why must you continue to tell me false promises?

Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

My first boyfriend knew I had insecurities and he swore he'd do anything to make me feel safe with him.....naturally he lied....

Comments about this poem (False promises by Ellia Keil )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/25/2013 5:19:00 PM)

    broken promises=broken hearts=broken dreams, but do not let it break your spirit..because true love prevails when two hearts truly become one (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,034 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/24/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    The poem tells us about how broken promises hurt.
    The note makes us feel sad. (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Raw With Love, Charles Bukowski
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. If, Rudyard Kipling
  4. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  6. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  7. Warning, Jenny Joseph
  8. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  10. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
[Hata Bildir]