Ellia Keil

Rookie (July 5,1995 - / Columbus, Ohio)

False Promises - Poem by Ellia Keil

Love that would never end
Love that was loyal
Love that was kind
Love that was truthful
Love that never hurt
Those were your promises to me

Love that killed me
Love that lied
Love that was hateful
Love that cheated
Love that ended
Lies do not become us
So why must you continue to tell me false promises?


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My first boyfriend knew I had insecurities and he swore he'd do anything to make me feel safe with him.....naturally he lied....

Comments about False Promises by Ellia Keil

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/25/2013 5:19:00 PM)

    broken promises=broken hearts=broken dreams, but do not let it break your spirit..because true love prevails when two hearts truly become one (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,906 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/24/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    The poem tells us about how broken promises hurt.
    The note makes us feel sad. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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