Family: Opposites In Synergy Poem by Margaret Alice

Family: Opposites In Synergy

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I like the idea of your doing shooting practice and meeting
world-class Springbok athletes and liaising with executives,
but most of all, I like the fact that you don’t drag me along;
in the past I fell asleep or ran off to join the catering team

The trip to a wild-life farm sounds good and so do your friends;
but I wouldn’t know what to say – you discussed photography
and hunting trips and overseas visits to Wimbledon and see the
Grand Prix and go diving in Mauritius and the Maldives

Whereas I would have visited Haworth – the rectory where my
heroine lived, Charlotte Bronte; I prefer to talk about Graham
Hancock and the Theory of life from the Pleiades, the search
for Atlantis and ESP, Elizabeth Klarer and Akon’s planet

I wouldn’t fit your discussion of athletes winning the Comrades;
you had a great evening and I’m glad; I would have talked about
quantum physics and truth in the tarot; interstellar travel and anti-
gravity, life after death and myths reflecting earth’s prehistory, as

well as the effect of precession on our view of the constellations;
you are happy and thrilled today because of your four accidents
and your renown for survival; the executives and springbok hero
enjoyed your company; I’m glad you had fun at that obligatory

function – and still enjoyed coming home to the kids and me,
playing with music and poetry – together we have a balance
between your view of clear-cut reality and my dreamy visions,
a fairytale fantasy in process of creation by opposites in synergy!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 23 June 2008

Beautifully said. A worthwhile endeavor: being happy about the other person's experiences which in a way enrich our own even though we do not directly 'enjoy' or participate in them. We are all different and cannot share everything, all the difference, with any one person. So synergy is the answer: living with the both...and, and not the either....or.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 24 August 2007

A beautifully balanced piece Margaret, ringing with a seemingly casual, conversational reflection. Excellent writing. Rgds, Ivan

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Ying Escalona 24 August 2007

perfect combination...going far is not bad... what's bad is going apart..

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Theodora Onken 24 August 2007

Margaret, i like this, and i like the picture of you as well! Theo

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Margaret Alice

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Pretoria - South Africa
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