(dedicated to Mr. Ronald Brautigam, a great pianist)
river's notes move
from one pleasing line
to the next ecstasy space
a unique luxury touches
from soaring lonely hearts
to the sweep of gleaming nights
unexpected adventures
your slumber will be enhanced
by scented softness of wood's zephyr
a subtle fantasy of love and life
sung together with warm smile and care
to hug you with every drops of joy and happiness
(inspired by Paul Gauguin's Les Alyscamps)
The outstanding feature of this lovely poem is its beautiful language. It's a rich mix of music and poetry with a structure that's simple but well crafted.10.
Lovely poem of purity and perfectness, tribute to the ever autumn living love in the beautiful planet.
Ahmad - - this is another winner.... when you combine so eloquently with music it is as if the words have a new life of their own........ thank you for the experience once again........ best wishes from Fay....
The music overwhelms this piece. Dominating the words and the rhythm. A wonderful write that is not to be ignored. It blends well with the poets vision of the river. A wondrous water song. GW62
the mellufluous beats..have suffused the environment with this poem 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ahmad, I can hear the music in this, your words. Consequently, as always after reading one of your works, I shall spend more time every day listening more intently to each movement of nature and each musical composition. My best, Carol