Fashion Icon. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Fashion Icon.

Rating: 5.0


That lady walks in high heels so fine,
her costly handbag, a fashion divine.
Gaudy makeup, daring and brave,
She appears like a fairy, caution to stave.

Her heels so high, it's a wonder she stands,
but she struts with grace, all across the lands,
her purse is so costly, it must have been dear,
but it complements her, with nothing to fear.

Her makeup so bold, it's hard to ignore,
but who am I to judge, I'm no fashion store,
she's a visual treat, a walking masterpiece,
with each step she takes, she captures few hearts.

Let her flaunt high heels and purse so dear,
gaudy makeup, with no reason to jeer,
for she's a dame like no other, a true fashion queen,
And I wonder who would be part of her perfect dream.

Monday, June 12, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: fashion,womanhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 13 June 2023

These lines says it all 'she's a visual treat, a walking masterpiece, with each step she takes, she captures few hearts.' Full ****

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

is that 'Full **** ', or was it meant to be 'Full ***** '? I wonder. It's EASY to make a mistake online, but often IMPOSSIBLE or difficult to erase/correct.

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Poetic Sky 13 June 2023

Everyone wants to be part of perfect dream but who knows what is in the offering, behind that mask and fashion, how is the heart functioning?

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

Asim, I found 3 definitions for 'icon'. Perhaps this one fits best here: 'An important and enduring symbol.' I wonder why you put a '.' (period) at the end of the title. I'm just curious. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

I STILL don't know your meaning for 'caution to stave'. A Poet's Note should not be 'needed' to 'complete' a poem, BUT one surely could help readers sometimes. ;) bri

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Sheeya Hacks 16 June 2023

This is wonderful poem. Poet's pen is mightier than Judge's gavel.

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

five stars : ) I enjoyed. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

I esp. like 'nothing to fear' and 'no reason to jeer'. I thought 'jeer' referred to a expression of annoyance/disgust. Wrong. But I find it (as a verb) is 'To abuse vocally; taunt.'

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

(cont.) .....the night off. Yes! Then it is just HER & ME, left to discuss fashion etc. and eat popcorn (and ice cream, OF COURSE) . bri : )

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

I, Bri, am, OF COURSE, the leader of 'her perfect team'. Usually she gives the rest of the team

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