Lonely Welshman


Fate - Poem by Lonely Welshman

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Fate

An Unspoken Love, A Teenagers Longing,
Her Spirit Transfixed Him, His Fear Controlled Him,
Joyful Words Shared, Invisibility Cured,
Were These The Best Days of His Life?

Individual Paths Taken, But Constant in His Mind,
The Years Fly By, Then a Chance Meeting,
His Feelings Reignited, The Hope Restored,
Is Fate Real Perhaps?

Unending Words, Typed but Joyful,
Surely Time to Tell? Must Take the Risk?
His Feelings Not Rejected, His Being Awakened,
Did the Universe Truly Care?

But Reality Revealed, Tinted Glasses Removed
Hollow Electronic Words, Distance Maintained
Her Heart Already Taken, The Power of a First Love
Both Trapped by the Past, Both Denied a Future,

Fate is Real.. Fate is Cruel... Fate is Truth


Comments about Fate by Lonely Welshman

  • Freshman - 1,222 Points David Harris (8/2/2014 5:28:00 AM)

    Know how you feel, Been there. Well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,302 Points Jacqueline Nash (7/30/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    A sad ending, love the last verse, really good poem. Well done, keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2014



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