Father's Fun Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Wow. Quite humorous write...loved reading it.

This is simply beautiful and phenomenal write and short and funny as well....Saheb......but you have made it a sweet poem instead of limerick.....while composing limerick you should keep in mind its rules like lines 1,2 and 5 should rhyme and lines 3 and 4 should rhyme also, lines 1,2 and 5 should have 7 – 10 syllables and lines 3 and 4 should have 5 – 7 syllables. Any way a tenner from me for good composition

So beautiful is your presentation of night- When the darkness caged the glittering sun, ...lovely that's the charm of poetry in the game of words- rhetoric..thank you very much