Feel The Space Within! Poem by Lakshmi Karat
Feel The Space Within!
Felt my life…
With my Senses..
Saw colors vanishing to white…
Heard swaras mixing to music..
Smelt the fragrance dissolved in air..
Felt tickles tangled with pain..
Uttered words bouncing back to heart..
All were there in me..
Those went came back..
Those came went back..
All were in the pot when broken..
Getting dissolved to vacuum..
.....All were in the pot when broken..... excellent conceptualisation! I do not know the poets level of conception(I would like to know) , but to me the whole composition is metaphysical; talking of intangibles than tangibles. Very good Lakshmi, keep it up!
profound written poem....Great read in depthness...Thanks.......CT
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Heard swaras mixing to music.. Smelt the fragrance dissolved in air.. ohhhhhh how can i praise enough this wonderful poem....... my God. i read a lot of poems here.. but your poem is unique..... you are very very creative... please write more. eager to read you. tony