Feelings Poem by bijaya koirala

Feelings

Rating: 5.0


i m searching that place where i can cry alone.
filling some pain where i can fly balloon.

i m searching that place where i can live alone.
filling some tear where i can fly balloon.

i m searching that place where i can dance alone.
filling some romance where i can fly balloon.

i m searching that place where i can think alone.
filling some views where i can fly balloon.

i m searching that place where i can drink alone.
filling some snacks where i can fly balloon.

i m searching that place where i can fight alone.
filling some kick where i can fly balloon.

Tuesday, August 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 24 September 2017

filling some kick where i can fly balloon10++++++±+

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That place of aloneness resides right there within you....I too am a lover of quite solace so e open space where by crying, it's not disgrace. Hope you find reasons to smile and laugh ore. Beautiful

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Bijaya Koirala 05 August 2014

its an imaginary of a lonely boy

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Gajanan Mishra 05 August 2014

very fine writing, I like it, thanks.

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