Once again, learnt the lesson
that true freedom and unconditional
acceptance implies total independence
from the opinion of others, giving them
total freedom to accept or reject as
much as they choose without influencing
our curve of joy set independently,
since this is philosophical I am bogged
down in terms, is this sing-song enough
or can it be fixed and streamlined
some more? Went into overdrive
this morning, as I usually do, wrote
a verse in an eager attack of giddiness,
was so happy, should I refine verses of
wild elation – or shall I leave that
moment of happiness intact?
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Oh, I know what you mean! That's exactly the question I've been asking myself for some time 'Should I refine verse of wild elation'? And I've learnt the lesson that whenever I do, I spoil it all. You've hit the nail on the head here.