Treasure Island

Atef Ayadi


Feelings: To My Darleen


I hopped,
I
can

Sea -look at the sea, seaing (with an a) is not what you see! -
Eileen


happy.


I mean,
sea her beautiful
face
as she is walking with an
open chest,
open smile,
and

open everything;


I mean,

not

everything!

Cause,
she knows

she may get
into trouble

and she knows
that enough well!


So, I
Hope,

and I will

hope

that she keeps
her natural
smile open.

being open
to the breeze or to
the wind

should not

change the nature of her smile.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 02, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, September 10, 2008
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