I want to kiss those hands
Those big strong hands
With veins like pathways
Fiercely trodden
Those hands that hold me, protect me
Conquer and subdue me
Those hands that caress and seduce me
Grip me, burn me!
Those hands that soothe and relax me
Love and revere me
And fold me and gently
Lull me to sleep
beautiful....in a concrete jungle..and buzz of impersonal life you planted a beacon of love a fount of everland .u come up with such tender stuff... beautifull...very nice did it twice only a tender loving heart can manage this chill
Hey Susan said it well indeed my dear ma'am... this is so very passionate and lovely.... I felt those lines in my veins.... I did only two or three these kinda poems, ... I believe poetry has to come from within.. don't know when I am gona write some thing as passionate and lovely as this one lolss.. But I feel this is written from heart with so much passion anyway really good one.. lots of loves/friend shan
This is sensual, seductive and beautiful - so much better than a fetish for feet! S ;)
Simply stunning poetry Sonya! The hands have it for you and I don't blame you! ! ! Especially with the 'veins like pathways'. I know the others have commented on this, but it did it for me too! Wonderful......love Karin 10
This is like a sweet lullaby. And yes, 'veins like pathways' is one KILLER line. The whole poem has a beautiful flow that gives it a great feeling of peacefulness.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love and revere me And fold me and gently Lull me to sleep ...so sweet, the touch of a lovers hand...