Fiery Love Poem by immanuel santos

Fiery Love

Rating: 5.0


If love comes to you, worries comes unlikely
and letting go of the person is such scary
what you wanna do? you slept late and tiresome
but nothing happens and continue to get over you.

many priorities are on queue, which is which?
yourself or other than you? but nothing comes first.
thinking obscure and want to be in tranquillity
notwithstand you keep pester you heart blameworthy.

you want it to see the time beyond your will
and enclose to infirm your ill silent aim
despite all of this tears and stained the fears
for you stride the feelings of your sentiments.

to reckon your willingness absorbed interferes
in dwell to crescent modifiable relationship
no limits for you are valuable gift i ever received,
thank you and i will stand as ardent of your highness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 21 August 2009

it is a great poem about love, where the reason wins in front of the thrill, it is a constructive confrontation..........10

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Ency Bearis 18 July 2009

beautiful poem....ah..love the favorite theme by any poet and various sentiments presented...and you did it very well and nicely presented in poetic diction...10 Thanks for sharing................. (see my poem ' Always ' and let me see if it will touch your heart too like the others)

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