Finally Free Poem by Luz Hanaii
Finally Free
If you wake up at night
And you find me asleep
Please don't wake me
To show me the white Butterfly.
Please don't hurt it
or capture it... let it be.
It is my soul
That has finally gone free.
Open the door and let me go.
It is nice. I personally would like more description about the butterfly, what it is going to do now, etc.
5 Stars for this amazing poem. Powerfully worded poem. Please keep writing, we have now a brandnew Homepage since December 2020
Yes. It would leave to form another larva. Beautiful metaphor Luz. A poem sweet and deep 10+
Kesav, thank you for commenting, this is one of my first poems, goes back to 2007. Thank you for my 10+ also.
An amazing poetic expression, dear Ma’am Luz...10+++
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 12:48:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I must quote.... Please don't hurt it or capture it... let it be. It is my soul That has finally gone free. Open the door and let me go.
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