Find No Love Poem by Ant Jes

Find No Love

Rating: 5.0


Why can't it be
The way I'd wish it would be
Not knowing you have no love for me

Why can't it be
The way I dreamt it would be
Waking up to see
That smile that enlightens me

Now I realize your happiness does not involve me
Curled in the corner
Tearing away at my Chest
Wanting to end it all

No more Love
No more Hate
No more Life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aira Olayvar 11 January 2010

“Find no love” The title sounds good, and I know, just like me, you are also striving for improvement. It is good for you to form this piece. Though I wish that the end should have been: Find no Love, Find no Hate, there’s no Life at all. Mine is just a suggestion, though I like it as a whole. :)

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