Midnight Lily

Rookie (In your heart)

Fire in my head


My thought cloud up
Like pools of smoke
Oops I'm sorry
My mentalstability just broke
Because of the fire in my head.

With nightmares I am wishing
Were just dreams
Silence is broken by shattered screams
My floor is covered in pools of red In all this fire in my head

My pulse pounding
In my mind
Fire alarms sounding
What did they find?

Me. Curled up in a ball
Shaking in the corner of the wall.

Because of the fire in my head..

Submitted: Saturday, December 01, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this because i had a headache and it hurt really bad and it felt like fire in my head but this has a deeper meaning then just a headache..

Comments about this poem (Fire in my head by Midnight Lily )

  • Rookie - 50 Points A Dark Lifetime . (12/2/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    Wow: O You are really good dear! ! You write with so strong words and so much feelings that you actually numb the reader. And that is amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,042 Points Hazel Durham (12/2/2012 3:47:00 AM)

    Confusion and a fear of the intensity of life, great imagery and lovely flow! Amazing write for your age, well done! (Report) Reply

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