Fire Works Poem by Jamie Parker

Fire Works

Rating: 3.6


Whizzing and banging
The Fire Roars
All the people come out...of there little doors
They watch the fountains much ablaze
This is such a very good display
but now it's time for bed
all snug and warm
But the fires still going
At the crack of dawn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean De Montfort 14 October 2005

Hmmm....a OK poem but not great

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