First Look Poem by Fatema Kin

First Look

Rating: 4.5


The first look that we share, every time we meet, brings a twinkle in my eyes

The first smile that we share, ever time we meet, gives me blushing cheeks

The first touch that we share, every time we meet, makes me wish the moment to freeze

The first kiss that we share, every time we meet, sends shivers to my spine

The magical moments that we share, every time we meet, keep me waiting to meet you all over again.

Monday, October 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: first love,love,love and life,meeting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatema Kinariwala 03 November 2015

Thank you very much :)

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Chinedu Dike 22 October 2015

Lovely depiction of blissful feeling of love, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience that that affects one profoundly - a voyage of pure bliss. Beautiful love poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing Fatema. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 October 2015

excitement well described

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Kelly Kurt 05 October 2015

A sweet, lovely poem, Fatema. Thanks

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