First Moment Poem by Ruben Gaytan

First Moment



When I first saw you
I knew then
You were the one
I wanted to be with
For the rest of my
Life
When I'm around you
I feel I can do anything
I feel like I'm Superman
When I'm having a bad day
All I have to do
Is see your face
To feel the warmth
Of your love
For the day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sana Rose 03 September 2009

Boy...u r such a boy! ! Poetry are feelings put down as such...raw and warm...

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Jan Fuentez 03 September 2009

simply beautiful... great piece... continue writing. keep it up.

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Claudia Krizay 02 September 2009

' I feel like superman'- great line-

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