Flat Surface Poem by Winter Wyte

Flat Surface

Rating: 4.3


I left it all behind
To be with you
I followed you
Till the ends of the world
I trusted
Every word you spoke
And when we got
To the edge
You pushed me off
And now I'm dead
But not forgotten

Saturday, January 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Igwilo Vincent Somto 27 June 2016

A new perception of death or heartbreak, i have not seen it from that angle before we reached at the cliff and you pushed me am dead but not forgotten that line is just wow

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2016

Love and pain! Destroying the ways of life. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan 23 January 2016

it's difficult to forget //////

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