For You I Exist Poem by Rusty Russell

For You I Exist

Rating: 3.5


I exist as a waterfall of love for you
For you to bathe in, to soak in
To be surrounded by me

I exist as a puppy for you
The food for which i beg
is the touch of your lips
the warmth of your breath on my skin

I exist only for you
I will come, I will wait
I will beg, I will plead
For you my love I exist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amandamae =) 09 November 2009

Short and straight to the point. I like it. Nice analogies. But there is just something missing... there is feeling and depth but I feel it could have been better. I give it a 7.

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