Forbidden Love Poem by daisy calder

Forbidden Love

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The woman have been put
her faith
into a forbidden love .
And when she felt the sorrow,
she knew deeply
within her soul
the truth.
There will never be another man
who will be able to proclaime
his love for her.
And there will never be
glorious things for her
and no other dream,
because she can lose her purity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mieke Jurgen 12 September 2009

nice poem.........keep writing...............10

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I think you are right - sometimes one can sense the magnificence, as well as the pointlessness of the forbidden love, and steps back knowing whatever is done or said this love won't stand a chance, as if it was a puppet played by a vicious joker... Sometimes love can't survive for other people's interference: lies, back stubbing, mind games and all sorts of ways which make hearts part... If you are in a relationship with somebody who uses you as their toy leave no matter what they say or do to stop you...There’s no point to stand on your ears for somebody who first of all doesn’t appreciate that, secondly doubts you, laughing at your feelings... There’s no point to be with anybody who doesn’t give you a chance to show who you are, but listens to those who stick labels to your back... Leaving with this kind of luggage you won’t lose your worth and dignity and you will always know who you are – the person who hasn’t done anything wrong, but tried to do her best in order to respond to somebody else’s affection, which unfortunately has occurred to be nothing more than a caprice of someone who probably doesn’t know what to do with their leisure time... Great piece – thank you for sharing... Take care and remember – having clear conscience and being fair is the most important thing... It’s not your problem if the other person fails to discover that...

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