Foreboding Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Foreboding

Rating: 3.8


Only when the last needle,
and the most tenacious ornament
have fallen off this year's tree
and when all bottles are empty,
the cupboards bare again.....
only then will the Gods relent
and, with a heavenly twinkle,
send a small smile through the clouds,
followed by some half-hearted flakes
of last season's snow and sleet,
silly remnants of a life gone by,
heralds of the coming insignificance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 December 2005

Very nice and very quietly soothing

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Ulrike Gerbig 28 December 2005

another very good one: i love this change of style! u.

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Joseph Daly 27 December 2005

Strong hint of pessimism in this one Herbert, but it is so well written, in fact, it is quiet beautiful, it would be petty to to judge it on it's theme.

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Mary Nagy 27 December 2005

This is wonderful Herbert..........Even though I always look forward to the end of the holidays and the start of the new year, there's a hint of sadness. This poem seems to capture that feeling for me. Sincerely, Mary

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