Forest Of Sucides Part 1 Poem by slam metalpuppets

Forest Of Sucides Part 1

Rating: 3.5


9 levels of hell
i know where I'll be impaled
nailed to a tree
holding a noose
I'm helpless
nailed to a tree
can't escape
run away
no use
I'm sick of the abuse
I'd have to sprint
through a valley
chase by a shadow
called death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Combs 30 January 2008

Very interesting.. what inspired you? you don't specify the 9 levels of helll.. are you going to describe that later? and why are you there? Very inquisitive i am..sorry but overall pretty good.

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Aldo Kraas 30 January 2008

This is very interesting

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