It's all so quiet
but suddenly so loud
she sits silently
then fidgets then crouch
'What's happening? '
her mind shouts
it was all so quiet
but suddenly so loud!
Names are screamed
hands are raised
she sits quietly and shivers
hoping for quiet again,
She's forced to listen
to the drumming in her ears
closing the door,
to block out the noise she hears.
Things shes heard, seen and felt
forever she's scarred
and drowned in the heart, which now melts.
Its all so quiet
but suddenly so loud
an important part of her now lost
never to be found.
So sad about her and the family/ you should have mention the stupid society where this events took place / once we are a part of society then //.....well write but write to for the universal message i would be better
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so touching & moving poem about the painful suffering of a girl well written quite an artistic way...keep writing