Akshaya Pawasker

Forever Your Parasite - Poem by Akshaya Pawasker

I was floating in your womb,
warm amniotic fluid bathing me.
A dream, I dreamt with open eyes,
of this safety cocoon.
I dream it often, to coil back.
My umbilicus though devoid
and your placenta shriveled,
a phantasmal cord still attached.
The Wharton's jelly dried,
arteries and veins clamped.
I breathe to survive, yet
I hold on to the cord for life.
Like an unborn fetus,
forever your parasite.
Mother, my shining star
Your breath, keeps me alive.

Comments about Forever Your Parasite by Akshaya Pawasker

  • Rookie - 118 Points Thomas Duncky (8/26/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    A mother is a mother only till death do you part she remains that star...No matter how bad you are you will always my son that is how mothers are. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (8/24/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    Wow...what a poem. Loved the way u wrote it..and the title ?? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (8/23/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    Wow this is an excellent poem! I am living it and breathing it. You write
    so lovely and poetic. Just imagining being in the mothers womb again.
    That last line is amazing. Touched my heart and soul. Loved it immensely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/23/2013 5:43:00 AM)

    Wow... What a beautiful way you have expressed each lines.. I can feel each lines..Really Akshaya your poem is fantastic...loved it.... ++10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (8/10/2013 5:25:00 PM)

    this is very touching, writing as an unborn baby still in the womb a lovely write to your mother. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (8/9/2013 2:24:00 AM)

    A great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,266 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/9/2013 1:59:00 AM)

    I breathe to survive, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 9, 2013

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