Forever Yours... Poem by Crazy Vampire

Forever Yours...

Rating: 4.0


You may put me down and call me names
But my love for you is a never ending flame
It won’t die, even if you mistreat me
I love you no matter what, don’t you see
You have me by the heart, forever until death
You are so amazing, you take my breath
Away and stun me all the time
You are an adventure, a mountain I want to climb
It is you who I live for
You are my everything, the one I adore
However you don’t feel the same
All you do is continue to cause me pain
You will be my tragic demolition
I am hypnotized by your tricks, you powerful magician

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Bellon 25 May 2010

Sonnet form for this expression of love's exasperations is very fitting. I like the poem. The feeling is real and is not artificialized by overpressuring the form or diction. Keep it going. yrs, abellon

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 May 2010

i likes it! ! ! especially the last part (:

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Jesse Palma 25 May 2010

Not bad at all. I know what it feels like.

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Hemet, California
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