Forget Him Poem by danielle wiltshire

Forget Him

Rating: 4.5


Forget his name,
Forget his face,
Forget his kiss,
His warm embrace.
Forget the love you once new,
Remember he has someone new.
Forget him when they play your song,
Remember when you cries all night long.
Forget how close you once where,
Remember he has chosen her.
Forget how you memorized his walk,
Forget the way he used to talk.
Forget the things he used to say,
Remember he has gone away.
Forget his laugh, forget his grin,
Forget the way he held you tight,
Remember he has her tonight.
Forget the time that went so fast
Forget the love that moved,
It's passed! !
Forget he said he'll leave you never.
Rewmember he has gone for-ever! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 26 June 2008

This is a very impressive display of talent. The writer uses the repetition device to its greatest effect. Many others attempt to do this but they always seen to mess it up, she didn't. There are a few slip ups along the way, but they are barely noticeable. Otherwise, this weould be a 10 from me. It sometimes embarasses me to know that so many young people have a natural talent I didn't have at their age. Simply wonderful! GW62

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