Under rain of words I stand,
Can't even wash my brain or hand,
Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand,
To act bad, to hide truth under sand.
And now all, me, she, we
Are alone, hopeless, can't you see?
Everything's cold, even my tree
Of knowledge which makes me free.
Full with emotins she weeps,
Me too, all we do, no kiss with our lips.
The clothes of wolves are now wore by sheeps
That's why I kill the nights by my sleeps
Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done,
And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done,
But we should have done,
Because you're God, and from Truth we can't run
Because about Judgement told us, your Son.
Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand, To act bad, to hide truth under sand. Full with emotins she weeps, Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done, And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done, and the final prayer God Almighty forgive us. such a penitent plea God will always listen to. thank you for this wonderful prayerful poem on forgiveness. thank you again tony
Powerful and deep! A well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent and feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Love and peace for always! Romeo-New York City
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Sina.
The need for forgiveness is here powerfully presented. Such a universal poem with which we can all identify.
I like this a lot, especially the first four lines! ! Nice poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very beautifull.yes god is all around us.it reminds me one of Frogh Farokhzad's poems. I do not know if it is right to spend our lives behind the sins and forgiveness.but where we can hopelessly cling to is the God. I just wanna say absolutely they are right.only in this case.we must be ourselves. cheers Nader