Forgiveness Poem by Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan

Forgiveness

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Stay with me I beg to thee
My way were dark help me p
Brighten up and be the light
From my mistakes tow me up.

I have gone a stray and I admit
Temptations came, was so weak
My mortal soul accepts defeat
The sin of betrayal I do commit.

Your forgiveness now I seek
Beseech your mercy I request
Let compassion reign at heart
My sins have now come to an end.

I condemned my self and ruined
Ill-fated life was it fated, predestined?
Wish I have been strong to alterations
This hell like destiny, my God have mercy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 23 November 2009

although i loved the poem and its theme very much however there are few mistakes that one must point out.i mean, they are not important at all and might be typos anyway, i beg thee, mistake.great piece of work.keep up the great work.

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