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Benjamin Krouskop

(Aug 29,1988 / Bellefountaine)

Forsaken


You are the lie that bleeds me dry
And opened a wound that I couldn't deny
Was everything you said to me
Just a way for you to get past my sheild
That night that we shared is not a memory
Theres a scar on my heart that just wants to need
You shattered my heart like a bullet through glass
with the way you held me just by the hand
The words that you said can't be taken away
Forever and heartache are just time to end

Submitted: Monday, June 18, 2007
Edited: Sunday, March 13, 2011
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  • Shamika Giles (10/16/2008 8:16:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this poem I thought that it was very profound and it is very expressive... I like a lot of the poems that you write and i hope that you intend to write more! (Report) Reply

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