Forsaken. Poem by siddharth singh.
Forsaken.
The moment you saw me
I knew you were hooked.
I knew by your sighs
and by the way you looked.
For you it was hard
I swear, I knew it from the start.
Still I wished for you to say,
thinking, with me was
where your future lay.
Scared you were
of my feelings
never could you
convey the meaning.
It was me
you wanted the most,
but when I spoke to you,
you were numb and lost.
To your friends
you used to lie,
but you could never
look me in the eye.
Overpowering desire
that you felt for me,
was there for me to see.
Now that you are taken,
It's your love for me
you have forsaken.
Far away with him you live
my love to him is what you give.
Your happiness is for what i pray
with him is where your future does lay! ! !
A heartfelt piece Siddharth - you have definitely captivated your reader with this great write 10
You are a good writer. I want you to be better. Suggestions only! i should be I, never the small leter. 'cause with me', would read smoother if said 'thinking with me'. At the end, your future does lay would read easier too. I want you to be encouraged with how good you are. I am not saying your writing is bad! It is very good, but I know it could be better. :) Just suggestions and keep up the good work. Deborah Cromer
Very touching and heartfelt. May your prayer bring peace to both of you. Happy New Year. Blessings from, Sandra
whatever u write sweety seems as if it is directly coming out of ur heart. your usage of words simply extraordinary.
So emotional so touching...Great! 10+++keep writing dear..
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 12:25:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Your love So pure and pristine Like crystal waters That shine Flow from your heart So divine Scared I was of your feeling Did you think it that way? For me, it made more meaning That one so far away Could think that With him my future lay. Tis only pure blessings From your soul, And yes happiness, that I seek That you pray And part with I wish to take away lovely Siddharth I got carried away and wrote this. Ill give you an A+++ and 10+ anjali