Four Hands Poem by Renee Marie

Four Hands

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When I was just a thought in someone's mind
did that someone know
just what it meant?

Perhaps they join, for pleasure they might find
but they join- dis-join
her seed already sent

They I arrived all wet and softly crying,
they introduce me to this world
forever stretching

Their four hands which pass me, still denying,
their two mouths never usher out
A blessing

I'm okay now
Though my strong bones did break
send me out to walk cold roads for miles

Sure, "lovingly" and all for learning's sake
I'll rise and fall to know
those "deeper smiles".

Now I know
where the fire burns and I will not go
their four hands will not reap
from me what they did sow.


© Reneé Marie

Friday, March 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: family life,resilience
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
growing up in a very dusfunctional home, the third of five children, to "child-adults" who were also victims of violent households, I turned to introspection, writing, drawing, sports, running away, an addiction to success at "all cost".
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Write comment. A nice poem, Renee. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Renee Marie

Renee Marie

Danbury, CT USA
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