Frabric Of Feeling2 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Frabric Of Feeling2

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The landscape is flat.
the weather is cold.
the silence of the moment
has left me defeated and alone.
My heart is beating like a
drum, leaving me hopless
and waiting for more.
A warm breeze passes
as i settle in this skin,
A time to reflect on on
all my sins.

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dissatified exmember 14 January 2005

David you need to read and then re-read your work before posting it. Lift the standard for yourself by making sure there are no errors before you let us read your work

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