Fragments Of Hope (Song) Poem by annie tuck

Fragments Of Hope (Song)

Rating: 4.5


We're seeking our endless dreams in a world with no guidance...

With tangled emotions and a heart-piercing beat,
our ballad continues, quietly and without faltering
From the other side of the far-off sky, our shadows blur together,
Our memories are chronicled somewhere between whim and inevitability

Even if everything decays in the whirlpool of time we spent passing each other by,
I'll believe in your voice

We're seeking our endless dreams in a future with no guidance
Even if I lose this light someday
there will still be the shining blaze you lit in my heart
We'll turn these fragments of hope into wings.

An unceasing rain and a gently-soaked moon
I don't care if I get hurt; I just want to move on, blown about by the wind.

A look from your clear, innocent eyes cuts through the darkness
We'll pass through despair and loneliness and leave our mark behind.

During the time I spent distorting myself to avoid creating ties,
I felt you there.

We're following a fleeting path in a world with no answers
When you're suddenly lost and unable to move forward,
my heart will shine and show the way to a hopeful tomorrow

We're seeking our fleeting dreams in a world with no answers
The shining blaze in my heart will convey my wish.

We're seeking our endless dreams in a world with no guidance
Even if I lose this light someday
there will still be the shining blaze you lit in my heart
We'll turn these fragments of hope into wings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

I really like these lyrics - while you still use some pretty abstract metaphors, the message of hope is clearer in this song and set in a solid foundation throughout. Distorting yourself to avoid creating ties is a great lyric. Mark

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