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for my dream (song)

A sea of grass I haven't seen
is swaying and rustling in silver
The scenery at the boundary near dreams and consciousness

(CHORUS)
Is it in order to meet you?
Or is it for the eyes of someone I haven't seen yet?
I'll continue, dividing the wind
For my dream…..

The alarm clock will ring soon, right?
But what lies ahead might still be a dream
No matter where you are, your important things don't change, you know

(Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze...)

Even though I wake up, I'm sure I'll still be here
(Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze...)
I think that might be what they call courage
Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze...
(I believe...I deceive...I relieve...)

Sittin' in the silence...In my...
Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze
(I believe... I deceive... I relieve...)
It's just too dark to see......
Sittin' in the silence...In my...

I threw away the piece of my heart because I didn't want to cry
Now it chases me and I can't breathe
And the reality I clung to withers and falls apart, piece by piece

Right now, I just can't see very well......
Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze...

Everlasting night breeze…
Sittin' in the silence...everlasting night breeze...
It's because whether it's reality or a dream, it will just confuse you
Everlasting night breeze..

Sittin' in the silence...

There are bends in the road at the top of the hill, but I want to go further

Beyond the scenery that exists only in music
It's just too dark to see...

In the continuing dream, there's another dream
Like a maze with seven colors
For the sake of finding a song on a reed pipe without scales

Even if it's too wide and my eyes become tired
Even if I sing too much and my throat becomes dry
With that sea of grass I haven't seen, I'll...
Even if you disappear...

It's just too dark to see...
Sittin' in the silence...
Sittin' in the silence...
Sittin' in the silence... Everlasting night breeze...

Sittin' in the silence...
For my dream
Sittin' in the silence... Everlasting night breeze...
It's just too dark to see...
Sittin' in the silence...

FOR MY DREAM~!

(CHORUS) (X2) ~!

im sittin in my silence!

Submitted: Monday, March 09, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Comments about this poem (for my dream (song) by annie tuck )

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  • Mark R Slaughter (3/11/2009 3:44:00 AM)

    Further examples of nice metaphors - 'dividing the wind' and finding a song on a reed pipe without scales are particularly good. I have to say it's a pity that you can't post the whole song - I take it you do write the music too?
    Mark

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  • Eyan Desir (3/9/2009 5:30:00 PM)

    this should me in the lyrics
    selection ok
    nice song

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  • Silence Dogood (3/9/2009 3:41:00 PM)

    In order to improve this you could add at the end the line ' sittin' in the silence...' only it wouldn't be in but my.
    Thats my thoughts.
    Otherwise it's nicely written and well done.

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