Free-Dumb....["Freedom" 's Catches; U. S. Laws; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Free-Dumb....["Freedom" 's Catches; U. S. Laws; Short]

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In this life "free" things don't often last long:
e.g. a free sample, in mail, of chewing gum,
or a free ride on a bull. (Don't bruise your bum.)

AND, it may be "free" to be a protester,
and free, in turn, to be protested,
BUT (if you get rowdy) it's "free" to ……
be arrested.
Free, that is, until you're facing the judge,
and instead of a treat …..of free fudge,
she says: "a fine of one hundred dollars, as the law book suggested."

(December 2, 2015)

Tuesday, June 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: democracy,freedom,law
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
as a young man, i impulsively joined some anti-war [Viet Nam 'conflict' days] protesters as they marched through downtown Rochester Mew York. about to follow the group across a street 'against the traffic light', a young cop asked 'do you want to get arrested? '. i said NO, and did not get arrested. i waited for the light.

The living conditions have certainly improved for 'the blacks' [African-Americans] in this country since many of their ancestors were shipped to America from Africa, carried like so much cargo, in squalid conditions (from what little i've read) . living conditions are still not great for many blacks, Hispanics, whites, and 'others' in the United States. and i hear there still are slaves in parts of the world (and sometimes we hear in the U.S. as well) .

anyway, read the poem a second time if you wish. comments are, as always, welcome, even if at odds with my thinking.

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 26 August 2016

You are free as long as you are dumb If you can speak better to stay mum For democracy, they practice two I demo; they demolished me too!

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