Free From Shackles Of World Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Free From Shackles Of World

Rating: 5.0


Be thou the one to beat
Both victory and defeat,
Be free from shackles of the world.

For your self's own good
Cultivate solitude,
Get aloof from noise of this world.

A flower with her own hue,
Cares li'le for dawn's early dew,
Get free from all fashions unfurled.

Said the sun rays that came
Spilling over window frame,
Read us, from mundane news un-bestirred.

To me there's not a doubt
On these war-mongers' clout—
It'd die once weapon's shine's dulled.

This breath helps you live,
And breathless you leave,
The lamp of life's when by Him lulled.
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Inspirations |32.03.2020|
Topic: world, solitude, war, life

Saturday, March 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,solitude,war,world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem draws its inspiration from a Gujarati Ghazal by Gaurang Thakore. But I'd like to apologize for not being so faithful to his lines and Ghazal format.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 April 2020

Doubt not! ! Only follow the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 April 2020

Follow the truth without doubt, yes, thanks for visiting.

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Kesav Easwaran 31 March 2020

Great poem that hails peace and humanity. Attractive style and Impeccable vocabulary yours. You would certainly have succeeded in your rebuild 10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 March 2020

Thank you dear poet for such good words

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 March 2020

Thank you so much dear poet for visiting and liking the poem.

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Valsa George 28 March 2020

Man needs to slow down sometimes and be in solitude. Amid crazy movement and hectic pursuits, man will be restless. As long as we have breath, we live. But when God calls us to Eternal sleep, we have to leave all our mad pursuits and leave this world. Very profound thoughts and a great write!

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2020

A perfect understanding of the poem, though often a poem too much analysed is a poem paralyzed. Thanks for the good words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2020

For your self's own good Cultivate solitude, Get aloof from noise of this world....... impressive inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2020

Thanks for appreciating dear poet

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2020

For your self's own good Cultivate solitude, Get aloof from noise of this world.., ....yes, it is. We must get aloof from noise in order to have good results for us. Brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing with Poet's Note.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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