Christal Carpenter

Rookie - 0 Points (October 13th 1990)

Freedom


All I want is freedom
Is that too much to ask
All I want is freedom
To forget everything in my past
All I want is freedom
To take away all the tears and the pain
All I want is freedom
To never feel that way again
All I want is freedom
To love you my own way
All I want is freedom
To make all my fears go away
All I want is freedom
To say “I love you”
All I want is freedom
To hear you say “I love you too”

Submitted: Thursday, December 14, 2006
Edited: Thursday, December 09, 2010

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  • Rookie Michelle Nguyen (10/12/2008 1:07:00 PM)

    Freedom is a the best thing in the world we have ever had... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,528 Points Naveed Akram (4/4/2008 3:44:00 PM)

    Freedom is in this refraining poem, of perfect structure and good appearance. It is a poetic method of explaining the unexplainable. Freedom is like a goodness of strength, a desire in men and women, and so needed that the phrase is involved repetitively, to ingrain and let memory gain you a form of freedom or liberty. It is up to you to be your freedom, it could even be with your loved ones. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dustin Ross (3/3/2008 6:51:00 PM)

    So true... i could not agree more with this poem then i do right now... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Holifield (11/15/2007 4:25:00 PM)

    Great poem. Everyone should feel free. Free at last...free at last...Thank God almighty, I'm free at last. LOL (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alan Curtis (2/24/2007 12:27:00 AM)

    I know how you feel.Freedom dosent come cheap to any one.Good poem.

    Alan (Report) Reply

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