Louis Cecile

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Freefall – Tanka Style - Poem by Louis Cecile

Spiral cirriform
gravity releases in air
fetal in soft curl
momentarily I be afloat
earthly kiss descent to touch the world.

Copyright © 2013 Louis Cecile

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/2/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    Always the pull of gravity, we cannot escape it.
    Weightlessness means we are falling as the same rate of gravational pull.
    I hope your fall was not severe or splat. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 20, 2013

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