jackrabbit krjs

Rookie (12-1-94 / Carlsbad, New Mexico)

Friends - Poem by jackrabbit krjs

when will they finally see that im alone when there with me
they sit and talk and joke around and i feal like ive let them down
i dont talk i just listen to what they have to say and hope they dont find out one day
im alone, all by my self my counciler says its bad for my health
so i sit and hope they give me a chance
thats hard to do when you lose all your friends
my friends thats what they say
but to me i see it a different way


Comments about Friends by jackrabbit krjs

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (5/27/2010 12:30:00 AM)

    The best friend, is one that, without a word can look in your eyes and ask..''What is wrong''. Excellent poem. We sometimes get to caught up in lifes busyness. Hope you find lots of friends of true worth. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/21/2009 9:22:00 PM)

    I think the way you see things and people is right. I hope friends will listen your silence one day. Nice write. Keep on writing.

    Best wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Aiswarya. T.anish (12/31/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    Good poem. keep wrting. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 16, 2008



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