Friendship Poem by Zoe Gonzales

Friendship

Rating: 5.0


I'd like to be the sort of friend that
you have been to me;
I'd like to be the help that
you've been always glad to be;

I'd like to mean as much to you
each minute of the day
As you have meant, old friend of mine,
to me along the way.

I'd like to do the big things and
the splendid things for you,
To brush the gray from out your skies
and leave them only blue;

I'd like to say the kindly things that
I so oft have heard,
And feel that I could rouse your soul
the way that mine you've stirred.

I'd like to give you back the joy
that you have given me,
Yet that were wishing you a need
I hope will never be;

I'd like to make you feel as rich as I,
who travel on
Undaunted in the darkest hours with you to
lean upon.

I'm wishing at this time that I
could but repay
A portion of the gladness that
you've strewn along my way;

And could I have one wish this year,
this only would it be:
I'd like to be the sort of friend
that you have been to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 21 September 2008

This is a fantasic poem, and you're an exceptional poet. please write some more, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 August 2008

It is hard for me to believe that you are only 14. There are a lot of people on this site who cannot write with the kind of rhythm and rhyme that you wrote this. They say that we should offer encouragement to young writers so they will continue to work on their craft. For me to give you encouragement is like giving heat to the sun. You don't need encouragement. You need a book deal for your poetry. You are the best writher of rhythm and rhyme poetry that I have seen at your age. I congratelate you young lady. I'm selecting you poem as one of my favorites so I can see if there are any hidden flaws in it someday when I have more time. But as it is, It was outstanding. I gave it a rare 10 from me. GW62

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