From A Pond Poem by Kim McInnis

From A Pond

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I’ve been holding your hand for far too long now
- your palm is hot as a swamp
- your thick fingers turn my knuckles white

I can’t run so fast or far
And there’s not enough water for me here

There were days when you carried me everywhere
- brushed my hair
- rubbed lotion on my scars
And there were no monsters
- hiding under the bed

I watched a daisy bloom with you
I walked along the beach with you

But I kept counting candles
And I grew too tall for your shadow
And I learned
- you’re just a man
- and you too can lie

I can’t run so fast or far
And there’s not enough water for me here

It’s time
- that I learned to grow
- legs of my own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Hyatt 12 March 2005

Great poem. I am beginning to think that you constantly stand in the shadow of an abusive or harsh boyfriend or relative.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 January 2005

Excellent, Kim. Not a thing wrong with this one.Says one who liked it a lot. H

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Sandra Osborne 30 January 2005

Well said, this is great. I think we all have father issues, especially us daughters. Excellently said. I swear the poetry on this site is getting better. Thanks for helping.

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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